I really like your pitch, it incudes everything you need to know about the magazine! however you will need to mention price and how often it will be released. Very good though!
I really liked your pitch. I like that you have picked a genre that is different to everyone elses. I think it will make your magazine stand out amongst others.
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Great idea Amy. I'm a fan of how your magazine ties in with 'download' festival with regards to the bands. You seem to have a very clear image of how you wan't your magazine to look (Paul Harris) and I think it's going to work really well!
Very clear ideas of how you wish your magazine to look and be set out, good idea using Download festival as a way to self promote the magazine.
Your magazine idea is clearly portrayed and its shows that you know a lot about this genre therefore will do your magazine justice.
Very good pitch, gives a clear idea of how you want your magazine to be.
Very original idea, this pitch gave a very clear idea of what is going to be in your magazine.
This pitch shows a good insight into what your music magazine genre is. The way you have used your photos and stated what you want your magazine to look like, it allows us to know your target audience and the genre.
Your pitch was very good, it includes everything you need to know but you need to mention price and how often it will be released.
I think your magazine is different and unique to other magazine ideas, I think it will work really well.
I think your idea is very original and will work very well as it targets your audience perfectly. Also the title of your magazine is very effective.
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Original idea which would would well. Your pitch shows clearly how you want your end magazine to be like.
i think your genre is very innovative and the images, music and information helps to reflect this.
A good pitch, expressing the genre of your music magazine.
Amy this is a great pitch and I like your genre. However more detail like the price and how often it should be released would help identify your audience more
This is a really good pitch, it expresses your thoughts and plans for magazine and although you have decided to opt for the music genre of rock, of which i am not too informed about, i feel i now have an insight to what the genre and your magazine is and will be about.